"Looks like we're headed to fahnd Dad! Mom, it looks lahke we're gettin' you and Dad back together!" Applejack said. "You three are being called by the map again! It looks like you have a double mission! I'm SO jealous! Anyway, you three are being called to Fillydelphia! Just thought I'd let you know! Bye!" The projection then vanished. Twilight used a spell to project herself in front of the Apples. Soon their cutie marks began to glow again. " Alright! What are we waitin' for then? Yeeehaw!!" Applejack said. " That's the spirit Mom! Let's go!" Apple Bloom said. Let's go find your father!" She then threw off her secretary jacket and her glasses. I'm sure they can find somepony new to replace me. Pear Butter bit her lip nervously, "Well." She smiled warmly, "You're right Applejack." She hugged her daughter, "Consider me back in the family. What's more important to ya? Yer kids, or some secretary job?" Applejack said. " Well it's settled then! We're findin' Dad! And yer comin' with us Mom!" Applejack said confidently. I don't know what he's doing there." Pear Butter answered. " As far as I know, he went off to Fillydelphia to live there. It was the only way." Pear Butter explained to Applejack. I regret the day I separated from him, but I had no other choice. I miss you kids every single day, and I miss your father too. " Yes, and I feel absolutely terrible for abandoning you like that. " So all this tahme, y'all have been alive and ya never told us?" Applejack asked. We had to fake our death, because it was the only way to keep you kids safe, we did it because we love you." Pear Butter explained briefly. " Your father and I separated years ago, we thought it was best to have some time apart. It's a long story."Īpple Bloom then asked, " Where have ya been all these years? And where's Dad?" I feel so terrible for abandoning you kids. Pear Butter nodded, "Yes, I am very much alive. Her eyes widened in utter shock, "Mom?! Yer alive?!" "kids?!"Īpplejack instantly recognized the Older Mare. "Oh! I'm very sorry!" She said, then looked at the three Ponies, and her eyes widened in shock. They walked through the city, and they bumped into a Peach Pony with an orange mane wearing blue glasses and a navy blue secretary jacket. They walked through the city, and Apple Bloom was calling out, "Hello? Anypony got a friendship problem that needs solvin'?" "We'll just have to find out lil sis!" Applejack said. "Ah wonder what kahnd of Friendship problem we have to solve here?" Apple Bloom said. "Woowee! It feels great to be back here in the big city again! Sure does bring back good memories!" Applejack said. The three Apples got off the ferry to Manehattan. Transition to the next scene, in Manehattan. "Ah can see mah cousin Babs!" Apple Bloom said excitedly.Īpplejack put her hoof on her little sister, "You can see your cousin Babs some other time sis, for now we have a mission Sugarcube." Manehattan! You three are being called to Manehattan!" "Yep! But where to?" Applejack asked, walking over to the map. Twilight's eyes widened in shock, "ALL three of you are being called by the map?!" Her eyes became stars, "That's SO amazing!!" She had stars in her eyes. "We gotta get to Twilight's castle Applejack!" Apple Bloom said. "Ya mean, we're all bein' called by the Map?" Applejack asked. "Huh? Mah cutie mark is glowin'! Am ah bein' called by the map?"Īpplejack walked up to her brother, "Mah cutie mark is glowin' too! Ah think we're bein' called by the map!"Īpple Bloom walked up to her siblings, "Mah cutie mark is glowin' too Applejack!" The birds were singing, there was a gentle breeze in the air.īig Mac was carrying apples in his Wagon, pulling it along through the small town, when suddenly his cutie mark began glowing. The lines on the ears shouldn't really go the entire way across, its kinda this half crecent thing inside the ear, without touching either side, relatively small.It was a beautiful and sunny day in Ponyville. The hooves have a couple rough lines, and they also need to have a bit more natural curve to them, and still have them touch the ground in a natural way, they shouldn't really be straight exactly. The mouth is mostly ok, but something about it seems maybe a bit off idk p. The mouth and muzzle look a bit odd, really all the nose should be is like a line mostly, unless you stylistically want to be like that. Maybe the same with the head shape, its getting closer though! The head is however a bit odd, its closer, but its still shaped a bit oddly, maybe to rounded even,Īlso where the head connects to the neck you can erase most of that line, i'm pretty sure in that angle or view it won't show really like that.ĭon't erase it all, just most, its hard to describe, maybe look at some references. Quite well done! You are infact improving keep it up!
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